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Post by j.ajabad on Sept 21, 2014 0:25:19 GMT -5
A raven caws at midnight black silk soaring through the indigo night faning the moon, the trees sway in the brisk winds.
The day has galloped away as I hit the hay I am stable for the first time today, I fall to rest to midnight's lullaby.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2014 16:40:55 GMT -5
I like how the first stanza seems to set the mood and the scene. Then the second one sums up moments of rest. I could almost close my eyes and picture it.
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Post by j.ajabad on Nov 1, 2014 18:05:43 GMT -5
Thank you Jellibean!
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