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Post by Jamie on Aug 30, 2014 16:39:46 GMT -5
My canoe bobs about
an indigo river
streaked cloudy
rain falls
like a curtain.
(c)Jamie 2014
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Post by j.ajabad on Sept 3, 2014 15:14:11 GMT -5
Hey Jamie--
I enjoyed the vividness of your poem. Your poem seems to depict a dreamy night with perfect conditions for sleep. Nice job!
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Post by milquetoast on Nov 8, 2014 11:24:52 GMT -5
Oh I like this! Very vivid imagery! Haven't seen the word indigo in a while. Not since my crayola box days.
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